Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Persuasive Essay Conclusion

Author's Note: This is a conclusion to a essay about why my family should buy an iPad. I wrote a full essay on this for a conference piece, so if you see it in a future post, that's why. I would like feedback on my word choice and voice. Thanks!


How could you not want to purchase an iPad? All of the amazing features that will actually help me reach far in life, unlike most computers that just wither away my time on topics that don’t matter to me. It can easily also help my family as well! Wanting to buy an iPad is actually a very selfless craving. Who doesn’t want to get an item that makes you feel selfless? An iPad computer is a wonderful purchasing option for my entire family.  

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