Monday, November 14, 2011

The Changes of the Characters of Life of Pi

Author's Note: This is a literary analysis essay on the Life of Pi by Yann Martel that I wrote for my upcoming conference. I would like feedback on my content of the essay and my conclusion. Thanks!


Every person in the world is unique. They have different appearances, feelings, and ways they act. The same principle applies to animals, as well. Sometimes, terrifying situations will change the person or animal from the inside out, from the kindest living soul alive to a horrifying monster that would stop at nothing to save their own life. In Life of Pi, Pi Patel must quickly learn how to survive with these beasts without getting himself killed. It’s an awful place to be in that I hope would never happen to me. If I was one of the animals aboard the lifeboat, I would have not in a million years become a total savage like the rest of them. The Life of Pi, written by Yann Martel, is a thought-provoking novel that shows how terrible living conditions can change animals and humans alike.
In the beginning of Life of Pi, Richard Parker was a defiant tiger who didn’t have to have a fear in the world. Richard was easily taken care of, and didn’t have to defend himself against dangerous animals or weather. He was the animal everyone feared, not the other way around. Yet when he was thrust into the rowboat, everything snapped for him. Suddenly, he was the fearer, not the defiant animal being feared. This observation led to him attempting anything to save his own life. If I was thrown onto the lifeboat with Pi and the other animals, I would sincerely hope that I would not become like Richard Parker. Although, I have never been in a situation like Richard Parker’s.  Maybe if I was, my feelings would change, since my life would be on the line. Horrendous areas of living could simply change the very foundation of who a person is on the inside.
Even though it seems like Richard Parker is the most vicious animal living on the lifeboat, don’t forget about the zebra that was contained with Pi and the animal as well. Out of all of the animals living alongside the lifeboat with Pi, the zebra was the most humane, yet only because this animal boarded the rowboat seriously injured. This zebra wasn’t able to defend himself against Richard Parker, the orangutan, and the hyena. Supposing that this animal was thrust onto the lifecraft uninjured, I feel that this animal more than likely have became a second Richard Parker, willing to do anything to survive. Living in this condition would have changed him just as much as it changed the rest of the inhibiters of the boat. After reading Life of PI, I think the zebra’s characteristics are the ones that I think I would have followed, if some of my life was lived on the lifeboat. Out of all of the characters in this novel, the zebra places the most unanswered questions in my mind.
Though the zebra and the tiger create enough unanswered questions and interesting back-stories for two novels, there is another beast placed on the lifeboat as well. This animal was by far the most terrifying, the animal that you had to protect yourself from. Fear was the primary reasoning for his actions, not unlike Richard Parker. These two beasts gathered together and preyed on the innocent life of the zebra. The hyena was always defiant and ready to kill, and being thrust into this way of life heighted his senses and turned him into more of a killing machine than he already was. Out of all of the characters in Life of Pi, this is the one that I can’t place myself in. I would never allow myself to become such a savage like the hyena. If I was in the rowboat, unlike this creature, keeping my sanity would have been a necessary component of life.
After all of the turmoil that the animals of the lifeboat created, it doesn’t seem possible that there could be another living soul on the lifeboat. There was, and that person was named Pi Patel. Pi was always a god loving boy, one that would never step a toe out of line. Once Pi was placed in the lifeboat, everything changed. His life was thrown upside down.  Living on a lifeboat for two hundred and twenty seven days altered his physical and mental well being, a lasting affect that would never return to its normal state. Pi used be a vegetarian, never touching animals other to help them find their homes. When on the lifeboat, he killed turtles and devoured every inch of them. Pi became disgusted with himself.  Yet a part of himself that wasn’t altered?  His belief and devotion of the gods of all three of his religions.  Nothing that happened to him would change that. If I was with him on the lifeboat, I would hope that my characteristics could be like Pi’s, always trusting in a power coming to set him free. I hope I wouldn’t succumb to despair and desperation, like the rest of his company did.
With all of the unique characters in Life of Pi, you can’t deny that someone wouldn’t be able to put themselves in a character’s place. Out of the inhibiters of the lifeboat, my actions more than likely would have been the actions of Pi. Pi was changed as a person during his extended stay on the boat, yet he never killed something that wasn’t crucial for his survival. That outlook of life while living in the rowboat would be the outlook I hope I would have. Life of Pi, written by Yann Martel, is a beautiful book that makes the reader ponder who they really are inside.

Poem Collection

Author's note: This is a poem collection of three different types of poems I wrote for a conference. I would like feedback on my word choice. Thanks!


Haiku: A haiku is a three line poem. The first line has five syllables, the second line has seven syllables, and the third line has five syllables. It’s usually written about a certain object, and my object is the season of autumn.

Enchanting autumn

All of the many treasures

Begging to be found

Cinquain Poem: A cinquain poem is a five line poem.  The first line is one word, the object of the poem. The second line is two words that describe the poem. The third line is three words that tell the action of the word. The fourth line is a sentence that expresses the feeling of the object the poem is being written about, and the fifth line is one word that recalls the title of the poem. My poem is written about a flower.

Flowers

Delicate, exquisite

Swaying, enduring, expanding

Aching for a reason to appreciate life

Vine

Carpe Diem Poem: A carpe diem poem is a poem that has to do with the theme of living life to the fullest every day. This is a poem that I created with that type of poem in mind.

Acknowledge, appreciate and gather life in your hands, elongate it as much as possible

What is accessible today

Could vanish in an instant

Our acquaintance time speeds along with no intention of holding back

Monday, November 7, 2011

Life of Pi Quote Response

After reading this interview between Yann Martel and Ray Suarez, this quote stood out to me the most: "the idea of a religious boy in a lifeboat with a wild animal struck me as a perfect metaphor for the human condition. Humans aspire to really high things, right, like religion, justice, democracy. At the same time, we're rooted in our human, animal condition. And so, all of those brought together in a lifeboat struck me as being... as a perfect metaphor." My interpretation about this quote is that every human being tries to be the best person that you can be, and we try to think that we can go through our whole lives being perfect and good, with no mistakes or wrongdoings made. Once Pi is on the lifeboat though, we see that humans can easily lose the sense of attempting to be good and turn into total beasts. All of us try to think that we would remain good, yet that's simply not the case. Being thrown into a situation as awful as Pi's would quickly turn us all into monsters.

Monday, October 24, 2011

Patriot's Pen

Author's Note: This is my reply to the Patriot's Pen essay assignment we had to create. I'm not making it into an essay, just a post.

 Being proud of your country doesn't necessarily mean that you agree and are proud of all of the decisions made. I certainly don't agree with our decisions regarding the economy, or wars. Not agreeing with every decision doesn't mean you aren't proud, or that you don't love your country. I feel that truly being proud of your country means that you must have your own opinion on what's going on in life. You can't just melt into the background, try to force yourself to agree with what you feel is a wrong opinion, and believe you can't do anything to change the situation. You comprehend what is happening in America, and being strong enough to defy it, if you feel you must. That's key to truly loving and being proud of your country.

Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Persuasive Essay Conclusion

Author's Note: This is a conclusion to a essay about why my family should buy an iPad. I wrote a full essay on this for a conference piece, so if you see it in a future post, that's why. I would like feedback on my word choice and voice. Thanks!


How could you not want to purchase an iPad? All of the amazing features that will actually help me reach far in life, unlike most computers that just wither away my time on topics that don’t matter to me. It can easily also help my family as well! Wanting to buy an iPad is actually a very selfless craving. Who doesn’t want to get an item that makes you feel selfless? An iPad computer is a wonderful purchasing option for my entire family.  

Robin Hood Story Conclusion

Author's Note: This is a different conclusion to the classic Disney move, Robin Hood. I feel that this is a good conclusion because it follows what the topic of the movie was, with a twist. I would like feedback on my voice. Thank you!


Finally! After fending for himself for three days, fearful for his life, Robin Hood had finally found the treasure. The gold! So much gold! Gold that would last him for the rest of his life! Robin Hood was overcome with emotions of joy and happiness. Quickly scooping up as much as possible into his pockets, and grabbing the rest in his arms, he started to run off into the sunlight. His getaway was stopped by his worst nightmare: all of the Merry Men! They could easily see all of the gold in his arms. Oh no, he thought. There's no way this won't led to a fight to the death. Dropping some of the treasure, Robin Hood whipped out a dagger, ready to fight. And fight they did. The Merry Men and Robin Hood fought until there was only one person alive. What person was that, you may ask? It was, shockingly, Robin Hood! All of the gold winking up at him gave him the drive to win. Picking up all of his bountiful treasures, he ran off into the sunlight yet again. This time, no one attempted to stop him. 

Friday, October 7, 2011

Story Hook

Author's note: This is the story hook from the lesson we learned a few days ago. It's just a journal entry sort of piece, not the beginning of a creative story or essay.

It's the end of high school. If it was up to me, high school wouldn't have ended at all. I'm perfectly fine spending the rest of my days in this time period of my life forever. I've been schooled here in this dojo for my whole life, waiting until I can take in and run the dojo by myself. With is something I do NOT want to do. Even when I was a young child, I didn't want to run this dojo. I knew I could help the world better in another position. The main runner of the dojo, Sensei Chin-Chin, is running out of the moisturizer that lets him survive, to not shrivel up into a little pulp and die. There's a bunch of students going to attempt to find this moisturizer. I'm not allowed to go. Since I'm supposed to run this dojo one day, the other heads of the dojo won't allow me to be put in danger's way. But how am I going to run the dojo if I've never set foot off of the grounds? I won't be ready for the danger I will face. So I'm leaving with them all. Tonight.