Wednesday, October 12, 2011

Robin Hood Story Conclusion

Author's Note: This is a different conclusion to the classic Disney move, Robin Hood. I feel that this is a good conclusion because it follows what the topic of the movie was, with a twist. I would like feedback on my voice. Thank you!


Finally! After fending for himself for three days, fearful for his life, Robin Hood had finally found the treasure. The gold! So much gold! Gold that would last him for the rest of his life! Robin Hood was overcome with emotions of joy and happiness. Quickly scooping up as much as possible into his pockets, and grabbing the rest in his arms, he started to run off into the sunlight. His getaway was stopped by his worst nightmare: all of the Merry Men! They could easily see all of the gold in his arms. Oh no, he thought. There's no way this won't led to a fight to the death. Dropping some of the treasure, Robin Hood whipped out a dagger, ready to fight. And fight they did. The Merry Men and Robin Hood fought until there was only one person alive. What person was that, you may ask? It was, shockingly, Robin Hood! All of the gold winking up at him gave him the drive to win. Picking up all of his bountiful treasures, he ran off into the sunlight yet again. This time, no one attempted to stop him. 

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